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Rin is astounded Nezha has healed so well, since his previous prognosis was paraplegia. She notices that war stripped away his pretensions and wonders why they didn’t become friends sooner. Enki arrives and Nezha leaves. Enki asks why Rin didn’t tell him Nezha is a shaman. When she appears incredulous, Enki questions Nezha’s miraculous healing process. Rin brushes off the comments and goes to Altan’s office.
Altan accuses her of spending too much time with Nezha. He grows frustrated that Rin cannot call the Phoenix and grabs her so tightly he leaves bruises on her collarbones. After this altercation, Rin, crying, meets Nezha again. Nezha accuses Altan of hurting her, and Rin points out that Nezha tormented her at Sinegard. Nezha admits that he feared Rin in school and apologizes for his behavior; Rin turns away, and he leaves in frustration.
On night watch, Rin hears shouting. A civilian says they are fleeing from a “chimei.” Rin remembers the beast from an arcane bestiary and volunteers to kill it. Nezha accompanies her. As they move against the flow of the crowd, Rin tells Nezha what she knows: Chimei collect faces and can imitate anyone. They see dozens of civilians and Mugenese soldiers with their faces gnawed off. They hear crying and find a terrified child. After Nezha comforts her and speaks to her, the girl transforms into a long-limbed beast. The chimei enchants them both, showing Rin Kesegi’s face. With difficulty, she and Nezha shake off the spell. The chimei tosses Nezha against a building, then morphs into Altan. Rin beats it to death with a torch, feeling like she is killing Altan.
When Nezha wakes, he says the chimei appeared to him as his deceased younger brother. Nezha earnestly apologizes for insulting Altan, and Rin forgives him. When she reports to Altan, Rin cannot look at him. She does not tell him that the chimei appeared to her in his guise.
The siege is several months in and Khurdalain is on the edge of falling. Qara’s brother Chaghan arrives. At dinner, Baji tells Rin how Chaghan and Qara’s power works: They are anchor twins who feel each other’s pain and cannot live if the other dies. When Chaghan arrives at dinner, he tells Rin he is a Seer and can help her call the Phoenix. Rin is frustrated Altan told Chaghan about her and insults Altan. Chaghan tells the rest of the Cike to leave. Once they’re alone, he threatens to kill Rin if she speaks that way about Altan again. Rin doesn’t want to admit that Altan’s behavior is scaring her. Chaghan says that Altan is cracking under the pressure of being a commander.
Nezha and Rin’s divisions attempt to retake ground on the wharf. A green-yellow fog overtakes the blockade. People drop, twitching and grasping their throats, as the fog overtakes them. Rin watches in horror as Nezha is overtaken by the fog. Federation soldiers in gas masks advance and Rin rushes into the gas to save Nezha. Altan grabs Rin and hits her solar plexus, paralyzing her. Someone carries Rin away. She watches helplessly as the Federation takes Nezha.
The Militia hosts an emergency meeting and decide to evacuate the city. Rin learns that Altan used a gas mask to capture a Federation soldier. She is furious that he let Nezha be taken and openly defies him. When the meeting disperses, Altan forbids Rin from talking back to him. When she doesn’t back down, he strikes her across the face. Overtaken by rage, Rin connects to the Phoenix. They both summon flames, but Altan’s overpower Rin’s. Rather than being angry, Altan is pleased.
Rin seeks Chaghan’s help with the spirit of the Woman. Chaghan guides her to the Pantheon. He knows the Woman is Tearza and asks her why she isn’t imprisoned in Chuluu Korikh; she says, “I am a Speerly. My ashes are free” (393). Chaghan seems perturbed but banishes the Woman. He takes Rin to a safe place in the spirit world, the Divinatory, where a goddess called the Talwu casts Hexagrams to read the future. Rin asks what the Phoenix wants her to know. As the Hexagrams are read, Chaghan becomes upset. When they return to the material world, they go to Altan immediately.
Chaghan tells Altan that the Hexagrams indicate the Federation will attack Golyn Niis, the wartime capital. The trio visit the Mugenese soldier Altan captured, and he says the assault at Khurdalain is a distraction so the Federation can take Golyn Niis.
Aratsha ferries the Cike up the Golyn River. After a week, the river turns bloody. They get out and run to the city; the countryside has been razed. Inside the city walls, “Golyn Niis [is] a city of corpses” piled in neat pyramids and stacked against walls (413). Further into the city are mutilated corpses displayed in increasingly grotesque ways. Altan orders the Cike to spread out and find survivors. Rin desperately looks for Kitay, screaming his name. Finally, she hears a faint response.
Hours later, she sits with Kitay, who survived by hiding under the corpses of slain comrades. Kitay debriefs the Cike about the massacre: The Federation came at night, flayed Irjah, and displayed his body publicly. Daji fled the city and the Militia surrendered, hoping for mercy. The Federation harvested the city’s resources and then massacred the citizens, using a combination of deadly gas and brutal murders. Among the other survivors is Venka, who was kept alive in a “relaxation house.” When Rin visits her, Venka says she was continuously sexually assaulted. She tells Rin not to pity her but to avenge her.
Rin runs to find Altan, hoping for advice. She finds him in a makeshift opium den.
These chapters address the overlap between the material and spiritual planes. In Chapter 11, Jiang tore a hole in the fabric between the two worlds with his Gatekeeper powers in order to save Rin and Nezha. However, Jiang has disappeared; without him there to control it, “demons [are] climbing through at will” (358). Jiang’s weaponization of the gods has come with a deadly price. An unnatural creature called a chimei devastates Khurdalain’s population. Most of the Militia doesn’t know what it is, but Rin recognizes the name. Jiang’s previously esoteric instruction and his emphasis on Nikara cultural stories prove unexpectedly fruitful. Even in the oldest history books, though, the chimei “only gets a few mentions” (357), as it is not an entity that belongs in the material world. The chimei’s presence represents the gods’ growing encroachment on the material world, which the Militia is not equipped to handle. However, without Rin and Nezha, the chimei would have continued to ravage Khurdalain—this makes the existence of shamans a double-edged sword. Every choice the characters make is fraught with the decision of whether the price is worth it.
Nowhere is this more pronounced than in the balance between the exercise of shamanic powers and the eventuality of being overtaken by the gods. Altan once seemed to have immaculate control, but these chapters depict the Phoenix’s growing influence on his mind and behavior. Rin’s addiction to praise blinds her to Altan’s suffering. When she talks to Chaghan in Khurdalain after the saltpeter incident, he tells Rin that Altan is more fragile than she thinks: “Altan is used to winning. His entire life he’s been put on a pedestal. […] He’s been fed a steady stream of constant affirmation for being very good at destroying things” (378). Altan has been weaponized since childhood. Both the Mugenese and the Nikara have been influenced by stories of Speerly power, and Altan’s only value to them lies in his combat and shamanistic abilities.
Altan’s past bred a never-ending rage and a thirst for vengeance within him. This makes him compatible with the Phoenix, who drives its shamans to destroy and burn. The god increasingly takes over Altan’s mind and affects Altan’s behavior outside the battlefield. Altan endangers the Cike and physically abuses Rin. While Rin previously envied his ability to call the Phoenix without ingesting drugs, it becomes increasingly obvious that Altan can access such power because the Phoenix never leaves him. The rage and pain Altan feels as a survivor of The Brutality of War is constantly present. Occasionally these crack his carefully maintained exterior, such as when he convulses, sweating and shaking, at Golyn Niis.
Chapter 21 begins Part 3 and details the Golyn Niis Massacre, which is based on the Nanjing Massacre of 1937 to 1938. Kuang has said that this scene “was pulled directly out of history books” (Kuang, R. F. “R. F. Kuang on the Dark History Behind The Poppy War.” B&N Reads. 29 June 2018). Among the most harrowing brutalities at Golyn Niis are the Federation’s killing contests, Venka’s tales of sexual assault and mutilation, and Venka’s account of the murder and mutilation of a pregnant woman and her fetus. These atrocities are directly drawn from the Nanjing Massacre, and they are the starkest examples of The Brutality of War and the Dehumanization of the Enemy. This event serves as a turning point for many characters’ approaches to war. In Chapter 10, Kitay insisted that the Mugenese were “more human than [they realized]” (232). After the massacre, Kitay renounces this stance, saying they “are parts in a machine” (422). Kitay and Rin realize that the Mugenese are merciless because, as Altan says, they were trained that way: “When you believe your life means nothing except for your usefulness to your Emperor, the lives of your enemies mean even less” (422). Altan’s words carry authority because he has been dehumanized by both Nikan and the Federation his entire life.
The Brutality of War and the Dehumanization of the Enemy is a vicious cycle with no clear end. Altan’s driving goal is revenge against the Mugenese who experimented on him and the other Speerlies. In Chapter 21, Venka commands Rin to “[s]wear on [her] blood that [she] will burn them” (425), foreshadowing Rin’s fiery genocide of the Mugenese people. A few characters, like Kitay, Jiang, and the Woman, argue for breaking this cycle, but they are largely ignored.
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