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Kiersten White

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Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2022

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Character Analysis

Mackenzie “Mack” Black

Content Warning: This section discusses murder and death, trauma and PTSD, and a cult.

Mack is the protagonist of the novel. She enters the competition because she is living in a shelter for unhoused people and has nowhere else to go. She is a young woman who was deeply traumatized when her father killed the rest of her family and almost killed Mack herself. Because of this experience, she wants nothing more than to be invisible. She now finds it traumatic to be perceived by others and simply cannot “think, not while she’s being looked at. Not while she’s being seen” (7). Part of her desire to be “unseen” arises from her guilt over her sister’s violent death. When their unstable father told them to hide, Mack took her younger sister, Maddie, to her favorite hiding spot, and as a result, Maddie was easily found and killed. Mack therefore perceives herself as unreliable and believes that she is a bad person who will inevitably abandon others. However, she grows considerably during her ordeal at Amazement Park and finally comes to terms with her past.

Mack’s physical description echoes her intense desire to remain invisible. Her hair and eye color are never described, and she dresses herself in anonymous and androgynous clothes. Her “hair is cut short enough that she could be a guy, or she could be a girl. She wears oversize shirts and baggy pants” (14). Many of the other characters only perceive her as an odd presence, and rather than commenting on her physical characteristics, they consider her to be an “unnerving, strange girl” or “the creepy quiet girl with the blanket” (218, 67). 

Much of Mack’s trauma arises from her conviction that she is a bad person. Because of this false belief, she avoids forming relationships with others, and she initially thinks that Ava and the others will be better off without her. Early on, she leaves Ava to hide alone and thinks, “It’s better that Ava know now that Mack can’t be counted on. Shouldn’t be trusted” (94). Mack is so hard on herself that she does not recognize her own strengths, but the narrative soon indicates that she is tenacious and perceptive, as well as being empathetic and capable of great kindness despite her fear of connecting with others. At the end of the novel, she lures the monster into a trap by allowing it to chase her. As she does so, she draws strength by chanting the names of her friends and their loved ones, including her sister Maddie. In this moment, she feels sustained “by hope and fear and desperation and something, at last, like peace” (234). Her evolution throughout the narrative therefore reveals a resilient young woman who finally grows into her own strength and overcomes her past trauma.

Ava

Ava (not to be confused with “Beautiful Ava”) is one of the novel’s protagonists, as well as Mack’s ally and romantic interest. Initially, she is described as a strong woman with a buzzcut, and she is bold, forthright, and physically powerful. Ava is a military veteran who has PTSD due to an incident in which she survived a roadside bombing that killed her lover, Maria, and left her with an injured leg. She enters the contest because she needs the money, but she often prioritizes helping others over trying to win. For example, she stays up all night with LeGrand and makes it a point to take care of Mack. Mack wants to deny the connection that is growing between them, but she reluctantly realizes that of the two Avas, Ava the veteran has become more important in Mack’s worldview. For her part, Ava feels a similar pull toward Mack, and the two often confide in each other.

Ava was chosen for the competition because her father is one of the heirs, although he is never named. However, Ava cannot perceive the monster, and the narrative eventually reveals that she is not her father’s biological child. He knew this and raised her as his daughter, providing her with a loving home. Ava thinks that he never belonged with people like Linda. Though she is not his biological daughter, she has inherited his love and strength. She also has fond memories of her mother, who made a living cleaning houses and always loved and supported her.

Although Mack and the others perceive Ava as tough and invulnerable, she is deeply affected by her past and by the loss of Maria. In moments of crisis, she has visceral flashbacks to the incident of the bombing, “smelling phantom smoke and charred flesh” (122). She tells Mack that Maria’s death made her feel like she “was evaporating, becoming less and less solid until [she] didn’t even know who [she] was” (133). At the end of the novel, she reminds herself that “she’s enough. She must be. She is the goddamn strongest woman in the world” (223). By finding her strength, she helps Mack defeat Linda and the monster.

LeGrand

LeGrand is one of the novel’s protagonists and is an ally to Mack and Ava. He is the son of Rulon Pulsipher, a man who runs a survivalist cult in Colorado and calls himself a prophet. LeGrand grew up with no knowledge of the outside world, but he is deeply devoted to his sister, Almera, who is disabled and nonverbal. He was exiled for seeking outside help and getting a doctor for her. In reality, Rulon raises his children to be sacrifices for the cult; he planned to get rid of LeGrand all along. LeGrand is 20 years old but is “undeniably still a boy” and is “soft, doughy-looking [and] very tall” (65). Despite his appearance, he is adept at climbing trees and has a variety of useful survival skills because of his upbringing.

LeGrand begins the novel terrified because of his inexperience with the outside world. He becomes “resigned” when he realizes that the game is deadly, and he decides that he and the other contestants are “being punished.” He reflects, “[H]ell is real and they’re in it,” but he decides, “It doesn’t really matter, because, really, he’s been in a color-bleached, hopeless hell ever since he was banished” (122). However, through his friendship with Ava and Mack, he comes to realize that his upbringing was deceptive and that he did not deserve to experience the traumatic things that happened to him. He draws on his newfound strength to survive and plans to return and rescue Almera.

Linda Nicely

Linda is the main antagonist of the novel and one of the point-of-view characters. She is an older white woman who hides her malice beneath a cheerful and harmless façade. In reality, she arranges the sacrifices in Asterion and is the mastermind behind the deadly hide-and-seek “game” in Amazement Park. When the contestants first meet her, she is described as being “genuinely excited to greet them” (15). As “a woman well past middle age with a jewel-toned pantsuit and hair that exists in defiance of gravity” (15), she exudes a sense of calm professionalism, but this is merely a disguise for her murderous motives. Because she seems so harmless, it takes time for the contestants to realize the true nature of the contest and Linda’s role within it.

Linda’s surname emphasizes her obsession with exuding “niceness” rather than goodness. Even though she regularly commits kidnapping and murder, she scolds Ava for cursing in her home and yells at Mack for touching her things. She thinks of the contestants as disposable objects whose sole existence is to ensure her family’s continued prosperity. As she tells Ava, “My grandparents sacrificed so we wouldn’t have to! […] We earned this world, and I’ll be damned if I let you take it from us” (210). Her callousness and obsession with maintaining her place in the world reveal her to be the true monster in the novel.

Brandon

Brandon is one of the other contestants who becomes a friend and ally to Mack. He is introduced as “the kindest gas station attendant in Pocatello, Idaho” and remains an eternal optimist despite the dire circumstances (11). His father is one of the Callas heirs, and Brandon is the product of an affair. His father visited him sporadically and took him fishing but otherwise neglected him. After his mother died, Brandon was raised by his maternal grandmother, who was loving but blunt. When the novel begins, his grandmother has recently died, and Brandon is deeply lonely. He hopes that the competition will be a chance for him to make new friends, and he offers to let LeGrand and the others live with him after the contest is over. Ultimately, he sacrifices himself and kills Jaden to try to help LeGrand, Mack, and Ava survive a little longer. He is deeply mourned by those whom he befriended.

Jaden

Jaden is one of the contestants and is an antagonist to Mack and the others. Believing that the game is only a harmless competition, he frequently cheats and tries to engineer situations that cause others to get caught. In doing so, he causes the deaths of both Sydney and Beautiful Ava. While he is brash, selfish, and widely disliked among the other contestants, the sections told from his point of view reveal that he is deeply insecure; in the past, he felt rejected by his mother and by several romantic partners. He then turned to a career as a CrossFit instructor to try to boost his self-esteem. He imagines his body as a “perfect machine” that “function[s] so well [he] couldn’t be sad or hurt or lonely anymore (142-43). Eventually, he is killed when Brandon drags him out of his hiding spot and pulls them both to the ground in a bid to buy the others more time.

Beautiful Ava

“Beautiful Ava” is an aspiring Instagram model who enters the competition to boost her career. She is very beautiful, and when Mack first sees her, she “is dazzled by the visual perfection” and thinks, “She is as much makeup and hair product as she is person” (12). Ava shares her name with another contestant and insists that she is “not the other Ava” but is the main one (84). This comment reveals her own insecurities, as well as her sneaking suspicion that she is a secondary character in her own life. Her insecurity compels her to latch onto Jaden, even when she realizes that he is unkind and does not care about her. He abandons her in the park and leaves her vulnerable to the monster. However, in her last moments, she tries to draw the monster away from the other Ava, and this action indicates that she is a nuanced character who is capable of kindness.

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